Pitch Deck Reviews
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Zombie Rollerz: bold key art but title slide hides the ship, move awards later, replace “turrets” with “weapons”, make ship management + bullet‑hell the USP, show concrete numbers for map size and average session length, link the playable demo (GDC timing) and Facebook test results, tighten timeline and state the exact ask. Magical Harvest: make farming and harvest mechanics front and center, center the logo, fix blue/green readability, explain the magic system and day/night crossbreeding loop, surface the character‑creator screenshot early, include playable demo link and a compact 12–15 slide meeting deck.
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