Pitch Review: Live & Unfiltered

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Live session reviews a real pitch deck for "Project Fox" and gives concrete fixes: zoom key art so the hero reads, edit the trailer down and label each gameplay segment, and shorter trailer to avoid looking unfocused. Deck must split gameplay and core loop, add an inspirations/X‑meets‑Y slide, and show a clear Gantt roadmap. Current status is pre‑alpha with Q3 2027 target, ~2,000 wishlists, a two‑person core team, and budget/QA and hiring gaps that make funding questions immediate.

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1. 0:00Introduction
2. 1:17Fox key art feedback
3. 7:20Trailer analysis
4. 16:07Core loop presentation
5. 20:39Story and world-building
6. 27:41Team and budget
7. 31:11Roadmap critique
8. 35:42Budget breakdown
9. 41:26Market fit
10. 48:09Contact and call-to-action
11. 54:07Final feedback and Q&A